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The Brighton Prize – How We Decided

09 Monday Mar 2015

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There will be a very exciting announcement about this year’s Brighton Prize soon. It is an event that I am extremely proud to be involved in. With a longer submission period and a later awards show we are hoping to read even more excellent submissions this year. Last year’s prize-winners, and many of the stories featured at Rattle Tales shows from 2014, are about to be published in the third Rattle Tales anthology. We are delighted to have so many wonderful stories and flash fictions gathered together in one place.

Rattle Tales 3As an afterword for the anthology, I wrote a short piece about how we choose The Brighton Prize shortlist and winners, aided by our excellent judges Bethan Roberts and Laura H. Lockington. I have republished the article below, in case you were thinking of entering The Brighton Prize this year and wondered what we were looking for. Remember to follow us on Facebook and Twitter @BrightonPrize @RattleTales and sign up to our mailing list for information about our prizes and events.

The Brighton Prize – How We Decided by Erinna Mettler

The inaugural Brighton Prize was presented on Wednesday May 14th at a sell-out show at Brighton Fringe.  Our winner was Linda McVeigh with her story Ordinary Man In Suit and our two runners up were Allie Rogers and Melanie Whipman.

When the show was over, a few members of the audience asked us about the judging process and how we managed to narrow it down to the short list of ten, and ultimately, the three winners. This was the first time we had run a short story prize. We opened submissions in February and closed them a just six weeks later so we would have enough reading time to present the winners at our Brighton Fringe show. In that time we received 350 entries, nearly all of which fitted the entry criteria (here’s a tip though, if it says ‘Short Story Competition’ don’t send an extract from your novel or a narrative poem.) There are ten key Rattle Tales members and, from that pool of experienced readers, one had to ensure that the entries were anonymised and a couple of the others couldn’t commit to extensive reading. We had seven readers, each being randomly allocated fifty stories. Each story had to be given our full attention. We decided on a selection criteria based on technical ability, structure, language, characterisation, dialogue, originality and suitability for performance. Rattle Tales is very much concerned with the performance; to win the story would have to work live.

The first thing we learned was that it would be easier to have a shared spreadsheet to organise the voting. Each reader’s first fifty were allocated yes/no/maybe votes. All the yes and maybe votes were put through to the next round. It may seem harsh to reject a story on the opinion of one person but we are all experienced writers who have taken part in the selection process for our regular shows and anthologies. We know what works live and what constitutes good story-telling.  The stories going through had to tick the majority of the boxes on our list of criteria. If a reader didn’t like a story because the subject didn’t appeal to them personally but they could see it was well-written and original, the story would be forwarded for a second opinion. The commitment of our readers is without question, all gave up their time to ensure the competition was run fairly.

Eight of us read in the second round. We divided the stories into two groups and each story was read by four people, who then voted yes or no. In the end it was simply a matter of counting the votes, and the stories with three, or more, made it into our top ten. The top ten was originally a top eleven but we considered one of the stories potentially libellous and, as an organisation low on funding, we really couldn’t risk it. (Tip number two, if you are using real people as characters at least change their names!) These ten were checked for legal issues, plagiarism and previous competition wins/publication history. They were then forwarded to our judges, Bethan Roberts and Laura H. Lockington.

This felt a bit like sending your child off to the first day of school. Would our favourites be their favourites?  We met with Laura and Bethan a week later to come up with the top three. It was interesting because Linda McVeigh’s story was the first one both of them mentioned. It was always the winning story with our judges and with most of the readers. The runners up were a little harder to come by; some of the stories were loved by one judge but not the other. We discussed each one and then narrowed it down to a top two. It was quite easy in the end. Any one of the ten could have got through and it is a shame that all of them couldn’t be read at the show, but at least you can read them all now in this fine publication. Which one will be your favourite?  The judge’s reports on each of the shortlisted stories are as follows.

Ordinary Man In Suit by Linda McVeigh

Linda’s story has a structural expertise that made it stand out. The story is simple, girl meets man, falls in love, finds out man is married but there are many layers in the telling of the tale. It has a Dorian Grey quality to it as the narrator’s talent develops through her relationship with the man and the portrait she paints of him at the end reflects the way she comes to see him, as an ordinary man in a suit. Subtle, beautiful, heart-breaking.

Not Coming In Again by Allie Rogers

Funny, poignant and more than a little creepy. Allie’s story has a sense of menace that could have easily descended into melodrama but is instead handled gently, creating sympathy for a pretty strange lead character.

The Real Thing by Melanie Whipman

A great teenage voice. This story took us into the world of young women in bars with authentic and funny dialogue. It has an uncomfortable undercurrent as the girls’ conversation presents different views of a possibly abusive parent.

The Short-list

Deep Dark and Dangerous is highly original with a great voice and folkloric atmosphere. White Light has an infectious energy and brilliant dialogue. A Long Walk is carefully plotted and full of fresh descriptions. The Fifty Fifty Room draws you in immediately with a strong and intriguing opening. The Strand At Lahinch is a refreshing take on the surfer love story with well-handled descriptions of youthful male beauty. Tracks is a deftly structured exploration of another world and political pre-conceptions. A Short Lie In The Long Grass shows atmospheric skill and mastery of suspense.

 

 

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Small Wonders

30 Monday Sep 2013

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Belle Amatt, Belle Nutrition, boys and literature, Charleston, Cherry Radford, children's competitions, children's literature, Chris Bradford, creative writing, flash fiction, Hurst Festival, hurtpierpoint, Jill Hucklesby, Lonny Pop, prizes, Rattle Tales, short stories, slams, Small Wonder Festival, spoken word events, The Mint House, writing

What an inspirational few days. On Thursday I went to Hurstpierpoint to attend Loud Literature, a children’s creative writing event staged as part of Hurst Festival. It’s organisers, Belle Amatt and bookseller, Deb Hollywood did a great job getting entries from local children. They were kind enought to ask me to help with the judging. The stories and poems I read in the 12-15 category were amazing, far beyond anthing I imagined the children would produce and it was extremely hard to decide on which ones were the best. In the end they were all winners because at the event pretty much everybody who wanted to read their work (and that was nearly everyone) got a chance to and many of the stories were displayed in Hurst Library. The atmosphere was very light and supportive I and my fellow judge, Jill Hucklesby, Chris Bradford and Cherry Radford read our own work and commented on the stories read by the children, all of whom read brilliantly and very confidently. In my category I particularly liked the story from the point of view of a hunted guinea pig and a heart-wrenching long poem about a man fallen on hard times which was wise beyond the writer’s years. One of the girls, Philippa Crondwell, submitted two pieces, a poem and a short story, both of which were so good they would have done well in any adult national competition. That girl is definitely one to watch. I was also struck by how many boys entered stories and read beautifully to the audience. Boys get a bad press about writing and creativity and on Thursday that assumption was shown to be very wrong indeed. Thanks to Belle and Deb and I really hope the event happens again next year though if it does, I think you’ll need a bigger venue! 2012-09-26 19.44.322012-09-26 21.24.55

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lonny pop

On Friday night Rattle Tales helped out at the Small Wonder Festival Slam in Charleston. Our own Lonny Pop was the host of the shovel themed competition and the rest of us were reading, judging, assisting, adding up (Countdown stylee) or just there to shake our rattles and put leaflets on every 2013-09-27 20.23.33 - Copyavailable surface! It was such a great event. For those of you who don’t know a slam involves names being pulled from a hat to decide who gets to read and we had a rather fetching red topper borrowed from my cabaret singer neighbour! Lonny couldn’t have done a better job and everyone who wanted to read did 2013-09-27 21.45.52(including this very lovely 92 yr old lady) as it over ran just long enough to make sure there were no more names in the hat! I read at the Slam last year and it was a terrifying experience, but a lot can happen in a year and this time when I took to the stage (as one of the Rattle Tales scene setters) I didn’t feel nervous at all and Lonny (whose name wasn’t pulled from the hat last year) smashed it as host. Can you dig it? Yes you can!2013-09-27 21.50.15 - Copy

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Starlings has been long listed for the 2012 Edge Hill University Short Story Prize in a year with a record number of entries, sharing company with entries from Edna O'Brien, Hanan Al-Shaykh and Robert Minhinnick.

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